This is the Final draft for our film trailer:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i086aDPxYpw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P-r_7ViWDPM
This was the second draft and you can really see how it had improved from the first draft but still needed more shots to look professional. The narrative of the trailer also needed improvement so we decided to use different audio which introduces the story (the phone call at the beginning of the final draft). The newer clips we got were inspired a lot from trailers we had watched online. We had also changed the colour and lighting of some of the clips as the audience suggested which made it look a lot better than the first draft.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ixtJMFImvUE